Curse

Leon_Ux-ixen · Jul 10, 2006, 12:31 PM // 12:31

Same rules apply to all my poems. If you wish to use them or post them on site make sure to PM with full detail and an URL. Make sure credit is given and we'll be alright. Thanks and enjoy.

My corrupted heart
The withering angel wings
The tainted irremovable stains in my torn soul
My lustful ambitions ever growing
The lost of my inner faith within the light
My fall of innocence
My purity gone within the abyss
I am forevermore the Fallen

Family and Friends fading into the dark
Demons creping out of the shadows to play
Curiosity of the cat that scratch my hand
The blood running black from my torn veins
No tears from my predator like eyes for you

The sad symphony of my life
The undead chorus’s cheer for my leap from the light
I now bath within the river of my tears
Pains so deep they bleed into my soul

My concerns faded when mankind’s once caring hearts
Cruel reality my awakening
Putrid seas of truth flood my mind
A tidal wave of pain from the bowels of soul
All these traits and more make me what I am
I am forevermore the Fallen

The rotting morals of man blowing away in the wind
The beauty of this world turned to a stained picture on my wall
Children living in unjustified fear of the human shaped predators
Threatening to take away their purity in lust and sick joy

Burn my halo
Clip my wings
Close my eyes
Take away my faith
Refuse my redemption into the heavens
Leave my soul to burn in the pits of my fallen abyss

Saver turned away, the end refused by all
The skies torn to shreds by my fall from the skies
Christ’s righteous death in absolute vain
My sins never forgotten
The curse of the Fallen forever upon me

Goats17 · Jul 10, 2006, 04:04 PM // 16:04

You're right Leon, that is darker than the last one. It is great though. Hope you keep righting.

~Dornath of EpCo

Leon_Ux-ixen · Jul 10, 2006, 10:08 PM // 22:08

Thanks goat glad you liked it.

Canadian Bacon · Jul 10, 2006, 11:04 PM // 23:04

I guess Kilika didn't like it as much as the rest of the literate population.

penguo · Jul 10, 2006, 11:51 PM // 23:51

It is nice and very worked out, but heck is that all people can right about anymore? It's different than emo and gothish though and that is good.(remembers poetry fridays at school and the emo girls reading emo poems, hahahahhhahahh.)

Leon_Ux-ixen · Jul 11, 2006, 12:26 AM // 00:26

I don't just write about that stuff heres a link to an example.

http://www.guildwarsguru.com/forum/s....php?t=3061734

penguo · Jul 11, 2006, 07:05 PM // 19:05

Quote:

Originally Posted by Leon_Ux-ixen

I don't just write about that stuff heres a link to an example.

Oh i didnt mean you. Your poems are great but half the world in general writes about that stuff is what I meant.

I just responded to something he said about my post, sorry I dont see how that is off topic...

Lasareth · Jul 11, 2006, 08:21 PM // 20:21

Keep off-topic comments and discussions to PMs.